Naruto: No, no, Dad, really! At school, they let out this huge fox, and I defeated it all by myself with one hand tied to my back! I even saved that Uchiha kid! Minato: *snort* Thats my boy! Kushina: Hey, you two, what are you talking about? No doubt another adventure of the famous Uzumaki Naruto. Naruto: Mom! You wont believe what happened today! Minato: Oh, shell believe it all right.
Laughter filled the air as the couple doted over their son.
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Naruto? Wake up, Naruto. You feel asleep.
Nghh what happened? Naruto looked up dazedly and felt Sakura jostling his arm in an effort to keep him awake.
You feel asleep, and I thought that was okay, but then you started to cry, saying Mom, Dad! Whats wrong, Naruto?
Naruto tilted his head back and looked up in the sky, taking a moment to bask in the brilliant sunlight streaming across Konoha. He closed his eyes and inhaled slowly. A tear trickled down his tanned cheek, and a faint, sad smile slowly slid across his face, and as he opened his eyes, Sakura saw that they grew distant and dazed. Its nothing. Just dreaming of a life I lost long ago.
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Egad. I was so happy with the idea. So i tried to draw it out, and i twitched quite a bit when I finished the drawing, but I let it pass. As soon as I colored it, I had a mental breakdown and started to cry bitterly, bashing my hands on my desk until they were purple and bruised. Okay, not really.
AND FOR THE JAPANESE, I AM SORRY, FOR I HAVE SHAMED. MY ATTEMPT AT CALLIGRAPHY SUCKED.
WHOA. You posted 41 seconds before I checked my dA!! The story's cute. The first part, at least, but the second part is, eh. Melodramatic? Yeah. And especially 'cause you used the word "dramatic." But I'm not here to crit your writing.
Coloring - definitely not your best job. Looks like you just slapped color, shades, and a few highlights on. But the simplicity matches the mood of the beginning. Well, other than the obvious about how the bowls could definitely be a bit more... round, or at least the saucers could, the only thing I can really see is how Kushina's right, our left, arm is a bit too wide. But other than that, it's nice.
I don't see why you are. I mean, I get impatient, too. But that's only after like... 3-4 hours straight. Or unless it sucks from the start, but you're a good artist. I think that if you tried harder and longer, the quality of your works would like.. shoot up. Guess why I spend like... hours and hours writing something that most of my favorite authors could write in an hour?
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Coloring - definitely not your best job. Looks like you just slapped color, shades, and a few highlights on. But the simplicity matches the mood of the beginning. Well, other than the obvious about how the bowls could definitely be a bit more... round, or at least the saucers could, the only thing I can really see is how Kushina's right, our left, arm is a bit too wide. But other than that, it's nice.
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Tadakatsu Honda: I will destroy everything you throw at me.
Shingen Takeda: What about kittens, Tadakatsu? If I threw those at you, would you kill them as well?
i cried when my proportions sped downhill, so i wanted to get this over with and work on another pic -_- *is impatient*
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GET IN MY BELLY.
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GET IN MY BELLY.
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GET IN MY BELLY.
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GET IN MY BELLY.
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