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Naruto: No, no, Dad, really! At school, they let out this huge fox, and I defeated it all by myself with one hand tied to my back! I even saved that Uchiha kid!
Minato: *snort* That’s my boy!
Kushina: Hey, you two, what are you talking about? No doubt another adventure of the famous Uzumaki Naruto.
Naruto: Mom! You won’t believe what happened today!
Minato: Oh, she’ll believe it all right.

Laughter filled the air as the couple doted over their son.

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“Naruto? Wake up, Naruto. You feel asleep.”

“Nghh… what happened?” Naruto looked up dazedly and felt Sakura jostling his arm in an effort to keep him awake.

“You feel asleep, and I thought that was okay, but then you started to cry, saying ‘Mom, Dad!’ What’s wrong, Naruto?”

Naruto tilted his head back and looked up in the sky, taking a moment to bask in the brilliant sunlight streaming across Konoha. He closed his eyes and inhaled slowly. A tear trickled down his tanned cheek, and a faint, sad smile slowly slid across his face, and as he opened his eyes, Sakura saw that they grew distant and dazed. “It’s nothing. Just dreaming of a life I lost long ago.”


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Egad. I was so happy with the idea. So i tried to draw it out, and i twitched quite a bit when I finished the drawing, but I let it pass. As soon as I colored it, I had a mental breakdown and started to cry bitterly, bashing my hands on my desk until they were purple and bruised. Okay, not really.

AND FOR THE JAPANESE, I AM SORRY, FOR I HAVE SHAMED. MY ATTEMPT AT CALLIGRAPHY SUCKED.

*shot*

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:iconaiko-hanayami:
WHOA. You posted 41 seconds before I checked my dA!! :D The story's cute. :) The first part, at least, but the second part is, eh. Melodramatic? Yeah. And especially 'cause you used the word "dramatic." But I'm not here to crit your writing. ;p

Coloring - definitely not your best job. Looks like you just slapped color, shades, and a few highlights on. But the simplicity matches the mood of the beginning. Well, other than the obvious about how the bowls could definitely be a bit more... round, or at least the saucers could, the only thing I can really see is how Kushina's right, our left, arm is a bit too wide. But other than that, it's nice. :)
:iconrainbowxtiff:
Love the story. 8DD ♥

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Tadakatsu Honda: I will destroy everything you throw at me.

Shingen Takeda: What about kittens, Tadakatsu? If I threw those at you, would you kill them as well?

:iconaiko-hanayami:
Oh. And gravity (ew - remember 3rd semester?) forces the chopsticks to sag lower in the bowl.
:iconhappygoluckyy:
i did slap a lot of colors on
i cried when my proportions sped downhill, so i wanted to get this over with and work on another pic -_- *is impatient*

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GET IN MY BELLY.
:iconhappygoluckyy:
but thanks :]

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GET IN MY BELLY.
:iconaiko-hanayami:
I don't see why you are. I mean, I get impatient, too. But that's only after like... 3-4 hours straight. Or unless it sucks from the start, but you're a good artist. I think that if you tried harder and longer, the quality of your works would like.. shoot up. Guess why I spend like... hours and hours writing something that most of my favorite authors could write in an hour?
:iconhappygoluckyy:
SEE. I LOVE YOUR PATIENCE. *hugs and tackles* I rush like crazy because i get pissed off T_T

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GET IN MY BELLY.
:iconmistuh-jay:
wow. I agree with what Kim said, though. You're a good artist, but if you had a lot more patience you'd do even better.
:iconhappygoluckyy:
lol thanks... -.-

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GET IN MY BELLY.

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